Life keeps on fading quietly
My years have been spend worthlessly
With no feeling fraternity
I walk my way solemnly
Make my path formally
All eyes lay on me respectfully
I'm treated like the great solely
But I owe them back disgracefully
I put them aside disdainfully
I whip my worries mercilessly
I am a powerful weapon ultimately
But my bullets are stunned by you so suddenly
Your Kindness shoed away my troubles so charmingly
You helped me upon my feet willingly
You expected nothing back unconditionally
From that moment my mind was on you individually
Even with all the fuss; you smile caringly
Pain was caused and you suffered sensitively
But you said regrets will go gradually
I don't care if there is no money surprisingly
You changed me astonishingly
I won't let a burden fall on you, even mistakenly
How can you be so gentle admiringly?
Don't hesitate to hold my hand tightly
But please keep smiling constantly
My eyes shall remain for you promisingly
I shall love you only
Well um.....How blunt of me?
The person in this poem's character was inspired partly by Somuku Kanou from the novel Okane ga Nai and by someone I knew from elementary school in real life.
You can check out the Okane Ga Nai manga here : mangafox.me/manga/okane_ga_nai…
However, I know this poem seems a bit straight forward and weird compared to my actual style of writing because this based on someone else's personality so I obviously can't describe how "That" person's emotions and reactions work.
In my younger and rather primary days "That" person gave me a little advise. He said "Out of all the people who are going to aid you in your professional life there's going to be either none or just one of them who does it unconditionally Watch out".During that time I was waaaay to young to understand what that meant but recalling it now I think he meant There'll always be that one person who cares about you and doesn't ask for anything in return, so don't push them away and feel low.
Please tell me your thoughts on how you understand the advise to be?
So this will be the first poem in my romantic poetry album called DEAR YOU
There's more to follow
Hope you like it
First of all, well done. This is quite a wonderful piece of work. I love the point it addresses and it's well written.
This poem and the advice you spoke of make me think of my mom. My goal in life is to publish a book of poems and she has always been by my side when no one else has. She supports me through and through, and believes in me when no one else does. And it's definitely done unconditionally. I'm ashamed to say that I have been horrible to her at times; said and done things that should not have been forgiven. But she's still always there and I can't thank her enough for that.
Thank you for sharing with us, I'm going to call my mom in the morning and tell her how much she means to me.