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Another day passes slowly
Life keeps on fading quietly

My years have been spend worthlessly
With no feeling fraternity

I walk my way solemnly
Make my path formally

All eyes lay on me respectfully
I'm treated like the great solely

But I owe them back disgracefully
I put them aside disdainfully

I whip my worries mercilessly
I am a powerful weapon ultimately

But my bullets are stunned by you so suddenly
Your Kindness shoed away my troubles so charmingly

You helped me upon my feet willingly
You expected nothing back unconditionally

From that moment my mind was on you individually
Even with all the fuss; you smile caringly

Pain was caused and you suffered sensitively
But you said regrets will go gradually

I don't care if there is no money surprisingly
You changed me astonishingly

I won't let a burden fall on you, even mistakenly
How can you be so gentle admiringly?

Don't hesitate to hold my hand tightly
But please keep smiling constantly

My eyes shall remain for you promisingly
I shall love you only

Bonsoir :ninjastar:

Well :finger: um.....How blunt of me? :innocent:

The person in this poem's character :sneeze: was inspired partly by Somuku Kanou from the :shakefist: novel Okane ga Nai  and by :runnynose: someone I knew from elementary school :zombie: in real life.

You can check out the Okane Ga Nai manga here : mangafox.me/manga/okane_ga_nai…  :fingerscrossed:


However,  I know this poem seems a bit straight forward and weird compared to my actual style of writing because this based on someone else's personality so I obviously can't describe how "That" person's emotions and reactions work.

In my younger and rather primary days :cling:  "That" person gave me a :surrender: little advise. He said "Out of all the people who :excited:  are going to aid you in your professional life :snowing: there's going to be either none or just one of them who does it unconditionally :backstab: Watch out".During that time I was waaaay :shakefish: to young to understand what that meant :typerhappy: but recalling it now I think he :forgiveme: meant There'll always be that one person :B who cares about you and doesn't ask for anything in :woohoo: return, so don't push them away and feel low. :tantrum:

:empllama:  Please tell me your thoughts on how you understand the advise to be?  :emplllama:


 :D So this will be the first poem in my romantic poetry album called :leetcrab: DEAR YOU :leetcrab:

There's more to follow :)



Hope you like it :dance:

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BlackRavenKuria Featured By Owner Jan 30, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you so much for sharing this, it is very inspiring and encouraging. It also gives great wisdom and advice. Thank you.
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MorganWolfram Featured By Owner Feb 4, 2014  Student Writer
:hug: you're most welcome :D
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ghoststalker11 Featured By Owner Nov 29, 2013
it is very considerate and loving. I am sure the person for whom it is written is moved.
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MorganWolfram Featured By Owner Nov 30, 2013  Student Writer
Why thank you :) I didn't write it for anyone actually, I wrote it on some one I knew.
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msimoneaux20 Featured By Owner Nov 27, 2013  Hobbyist Writer

First of all, well done. This is quite a wonderful piece of work. I love the point it addresses and it's well written.


This poem and the advice you spoke of make me think of my mom. My goal in life is to publish a book of poems and she has always been by my side when no one else has. She supports me through and through, and believes in me when no one else does. And it's definitely done unconditionally. I'm ashamed to say that I have been horrible to her at times; said and done things that should not have been forgiven. But she's still always there and I can't thank her enough for that.


Thank you for sharing with us, I'm going to call my mom in the morning and tell her how much she means to me.

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MorganWolfram Featured By Owner Nov 27, 2013  Student Writer
Thank you :D

I'm soo happy this helped you! It means a lot to me :dance: and you have a really kind and amazing mother, I hope you have great future ahead with her.
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