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Give me your hand
and lets escape to wonderland
The ecstasy unable to withstand


But I fear the worst of my touch
That you abruptly desire to clutch
Might shatter you too much
Sup! :ninjastar:

How's every one doing? :juggle:

I turned into an insomniac for the last few days :nirvana: You know when you hit the pillow every night and :tears: all the annoying most embarrassing moments :steaming: decide to parade in your head (:blahblah: Maybe?)
Doesn't that sometimes makes you doubt yourself :sniff:? Wishing you can take it back? :stfu:
I couldn't fall asleep until I wrote this :D
Its awkwardly altering :frustrated: when you fear that when some one finds out something about you that should be hidden Or when some one makes an embarrassing discovery of you; The way they see you completely changes! Their attitude towards you is different; You're not the person they used to know anymore. Despite this happening or not happening; every one is afraid of showing their dark side for it might cost a relation, a friendship, family, THAT SPECIAL PERSON, etc.
Its alright, You are not alone :headbang:
All you need to know is that people who really love you will accept you no matter how you are ;)

You all have a great day/night ahead :#1:
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darkangelcat101 Featured By Owner Nov 11, 2013
I can really relate and I love how consise the peom is
Also love the comment you left after the peom as it's so true how your true love (excuse the cliche) will love every ounce of you 
5 seconds hug 
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MorganWolfram Featured By Owner Nov 11, 2013  Student Writer
Thanks a million :D
I'm glad you enjoyed it!
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Dracosphere Featured By Owner Oct 26, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I agree with the description and I love the poem.
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MorganWolfram Featured By Owner Oct 26, 2013  Student Writer
Thanks :)
Glad you like it!
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Dracosphere Featured By Owner Oct 26, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
You're welcome! Hey, thanks for the llama!
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MorganWolfram Featured By Owner Oct 26, 2013  Student Writer
No probs ;)
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MultifacetedMage Featured By Owner Oct 22, 2013  Professional General Artist
Morgan wolfram I am not trying to be overly picky here because I love the over all poem but I think you ment to write the word ecstasy and instead you wrote escasy now I understand that you were experiencing some sleep deprevation and I do hope you are able to find some type of temporary help for that. Please continue your writing as it is quite good. just remember when you have the chance and are feeling better take the time to edit as even the best of us including me make errors. Perfection is a unrealistic goal doing the best that you can is all that matters.
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MorganWolfram Featured By Owner Oct 22, 2013  Student Writer
Thank you very much! I'm glad you like my writing :D
It's just that I'm stressed with school, work and some other things, I don't have time to even log in on DA. I always type my literature in a hurry and editing can't be done on the spot. Sorry about that. I'll edit it.
Thanks for the advise, I feel a lot better :dance:

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MultifacetedMage Featured By Owner Oct 23, 2013  Professional General Artist
You are very welcome
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MorganWolfram Featured By Owner Oct 24, 2013  Student Writer
:hug: 
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